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Time is nothing but a word
At the sound of the singing bird
The world could stop
The clock would still tick

A dying day
Becomes a golden beauty
The dawn
A rising magnificence

The singing bird
Weaves a tear
Into all beating hearts

He alone
Has the voice to match
Heaven’s sweet angels

No day will pass
Where he fails
To melt a frozen soul

Light glows
From his shining eyes

Like starlight
From the ocean of life

His angelic voice
A faraway sound
Echoes hope
To every corner of the world

The day the singing-bird voice dies
Will be the day hope for the world dies too

For no hope lives a second
Without the singing bird
©2008-2010 ~Glittering-Scarlett
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I hope you like this poem guys :D
I know its beeen ages since i submitted something :cry: sooorrry :hug:

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:iconsnoringfrog:
It has been forever since you've submitted, good to see you back.

"Light glows
From his shining eyes

Like starlight
From the ocean of life"

I'd make that all one stanza, I think it fits better that way. Other than that, it was good, but I don't think it's your best. Definitely not bad at all though.

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:icondancewithmywords:
veeeeeery nice :D

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:iconglittering-scarlett:
I agree :)
Thanks for the comment ;P

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:iconglittering-scarlett:
Thank you v much gal D :hug:

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This gal is seriously cool :D ~JustYoyo
:iconglittering-scarlett:
Yup i'm backkkkkk again D im glad to see you've kept ya account :)

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This gal is seriously cool :D ~JustYoyo
:icondark-dragon-wings:
OMG! :wow: the opening just blew me away!!! you are very talented my dear! :nod:!! :heart:

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