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He who walked
The thirsty land
Was seen not again

Drained of life was he
Before dropping defenceless
To the grains of flowing gold

He gazed in his last moment
The merciless ball of fire
Weep the tears
Of heaven’s lost ocean

A plea for forgiveness it was
For she the mighty light
Had snatched
Yet another soul
In the thirsty land
Of flowing gold
©2008-2010 ~Glittering-Scarlett
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:iconcharlie-charles:
Hmm, i'm not sure that i quite understand this one. Although i assure you it is due to my horrid grasp of peotry and nothing to do with the quality of your work :teddy:
what does this poem symbolise?

ps: i wrote a peom. you should read it and tell me what you think :)
:icondark-dragon-wings:
omg thats beautifull :happycry: a job very well done =D

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:icondancewithmywords:
ooooooooooh!! i like it:) even though i'm not quite sure wot its about bu tit just flows if ya get my drift?:)

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